I’ve edited Mayana’s Hunt, which I’d written of a morning and had to change quickly when some names changed – and I missed some changes. I’ve also cleaned up the voice and cut some junk. After doing 3 passes of edits over the main ms, I’ve actually learned a few things :-).
The PHJ Universe
This blog is about technology, the future, and science fiction. Some posts are about our world's current tech. Others will focus on what could be. I'll post some stories of the future to muse about how strange things could really get if humans ever make it to the stars.
Or, how much they might stay the same.
STATUS OF THE MS: Nearly done! I have taken the lessons from workshopping it, and from reading some other seminal works of Sci-Fi to squeeze out all but the tension, conflict, excitement and, I hope, satisfaction of characters who struggle and only just overcome their challenges and themselves.